Wednesday, July 27, 2022

BROKEN HEART. SCREENPLAY.

 BROKEN HEART.  Screenplay.

24-04-2020 .


After watching screenplay videos on YouTube I tried to write a sample of the screenplay. I am comfortable writing " movie scripts" Based on that I can direct but we all know a screenplay is a technical document for movie making used by different departments of movie production. Director, cameraman, actors etc. Writing a screenplay is a time consuming process. It will also restrict flow of thoughts. You have to write a screenplay in present tense, that itself is the tension. 


Here is an old method of screenplay writing. This method is still followed by some of the screenplay writers in south indian film industry. Take white plain paper and fold it in equal parts. Left side note is for discription / /scenes or situations. Right side note is for names and dialogues. 


Here is my first attempt to adapt the first chapter of broken heart into a screenplay. The writer or director will decide how to present scenes. Both of them use their creative ideas to present scripts. Below you will find manually written screenplay.


BROKEN HEART. Screenplay.


INT/ EXT. Ajay' s house.morning .  Fade in 


1 A . Radha. Aged 46 .

 Mother of Ajay . Walks 

towards photograph

 of lord Murugan and

 lit a small lamp. pray

 for the wellbeing of 

her family members 

and the world at large. 

After the prayer she 

goes to the kitchen.

 Place a milk cooker

 and pour milk in it. 

Light gas stove and

 took ' kola mavu "

 and started making

 kolam in front of her

 home.


After sometime… ..

 the milk cooker started 

whistling. 

                                   Cut to 


2 A . Krishnan . 52 years.

 Ajay's father after hearing

 a whistling noise gets up

 from the bed and go to

 the wash basin and wash

 his face and wipe it with

 a bath towel. He comes

 to the sitting room and 

started reading the newspaper.


3 A . Radha finish her

 kolam work and goes to

 kitchen and prepare 

coffee. She pour two

 cups of coffee in cups 

and rest of the coffee 

In a flask. In a tray she 

took it to her husband.

 She held out one cup of 

coffee to her husband.


                                  Radha ( with a smile)

                                          " Koffee"

Krishnan takes coffee 

without saying anything.

 He started drinking. 

Radha sat next to him.                 

                              

                                  Radha

                    " What is the special news today?"  

                                

                                      Krishnan

                                 " As usual, it is all about corona (covid 19)

number of people affected , number of

                                         Number of people died....."


                                  Radha

                                " I am really scared, is there no antibiotics

                           available for corona ?"

      

                                  Krishnan

                                 " We can only take precautions . nobody is

immune to corona, as of now there is no

                             antibiotics available in the market"

                              

Radha collected 

both the empty cups

 and was about to go 

to the kitchen.

Krishnan held her hand .


                                 Krishnan

                                " Sit with me.."

                  

                                 Radha

                              " Today is not Sunday,  Today is Monday . 

                              before You go office i have to prepare

                             breakfast and lunch for you...."

                               

                                 Krishnan

                                 " Okay, i forgot , you carry on...."

                            

Radha went to kitchen

To prepare breakfast

And lunch.                             CUT TO 


4 A . Ajay. 24 yrs 

Opens his eyes, 

table clock is showing 

 7.35 am.  He got out

Of the room in pajama

 and came to the sitting

 room. 

     

                                Krishnan

                                  " Good morning, Ajay"


                                   Ajay ( louder)

                                      " MAA… . KOFFEE"


                                    Radha ( OS)

                                     " yeah, bringing.."


Ajay sat next 

to his Dad.


                                Ajay

                              " Good morning, Dad"


Radha brought 

coffee for Ajay.  

Ajay took coffee

 from her.


                               Krishnan

                               " Ajay, what is your program today?"

                      

                               Ajay

                              " Dad, today I have to attend interview at

                           at C S Sholinganallur at 11 am " 

                 

                               Krishnan

                       " Good, have you prepared for interview?"

                 

                       Ajay

                       " Yes, Dad,  No worries"


                            Radha

                    " If you get job here in chennai i will break

101 Coconut at pullayar temple"


                              Ajay

                            " Maa… every time you make promises i get

                    job  in a faraway places like  Bombay

or Delhi "


                        Radha

                  " For you everything is a joke"


Krishnan handed 

over Newspaper to 

Ajay.

     

                                Krishnan

                           " I will go and freshen up"


Krishnan goes to 

his room. Radha took 

empty cups And went 

to kitchen to prepare

Breakfast and lunch.

Ajay goes on reading

Newspaper.


At 8.15 am Ajay goes

To his room to get ready

For an interview..


At 8.45 am Radha arrange

Breakfast on the dining table.


Krishnan came out of his

Room. He is ready for

Breakfast.

                                  Krishnan

                           " Ajay, come for breakfast"


                                Ajay

                              " Yeah, Dad. Coming"


Ajay came out of 

his room. Well dressed 

with certificate file in his 

hand. He sat next to

his father. Radha starts 

Serving breakfast for 

them. 


                                  Krishnan

                         " Ajay, today I will go office

                    By auto, you go for interview "


                                  Ajay


                        " Dad, interview is at 11 am . 

                There is enough time for me to

                         Drop you at your office".

                          

                                   Krishnan


                                 " Okay, fine. Ajay "


Both of them finished

Their breakfast. Ajay

 went and cleaned his 

bike.  Meanwhile Krishnan 

and Radha came to 

the main gate.


Ajay started bike.

 Krishnan sat at the back.

Radha handed over

 briefcase and lunch

 box to krishnan.


Krishnan waved at Radha

 and she waved back. Ajay

Could see their images on

 rear mirror. Ajay shifted gear. 



                                  Radha

                                   " Ajay, drive carefully"


Bike started moving… 


                             Ajay


                           " Sure, Maa… "


Bike gradually faded out. 


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