Dear readers,
My fiction Broken Heart (horror) now available in tamil language (AMANUSHAN). published by Manimekalai publication ,Chennai-17. 122 page book cost Rs 60/-only.Eternal Love sci-fiction also available in tamil language (Idhayam Marappathillai) .
140 page book cost Rs 70/- only.Both my fictions ‘Eternal Love and Broken Heart' are copyright registered and published books now available for movie production.
140 page book cost Rs 70/- only.Both my fictions ‘Eternal Love and Broken Heart' are copyright registered and published books now available for movie production.
BROKEN
HEART. Horror fiction.
‘A M A N
U S H A N A N ‘(A man with supernatural power)
Logline: ‘I will hunt down and kill every one of you…I swear!’
Short synopsis.
Short synopsis.
A young
married couple from New Delhi decides to spend their honeymoon at hill resort Kodaikanal
in Tamil Nadu. Near the suicide point at about 8.30
P.M. in the pouring rain her husband was brutally beaten to death and his young wife gets gang raped and
murdered. They burnt the body of husband and wife so that there is no evidence.
Only husband alone comes back to life! Out of ten million people in
Chennai city he will have to hunt down and kill each one of the perpetrators of
crime in a gruesome manner. what makes this
fiction unique? The special appearance, character and special power given to
Ajay make this fiction interesting.
BROKEN
HEART'. MOVIE SCRIPT.
01-08-15.
Visualization is very important part of every
creative person. As a director you should be able to see text as visual medium.
Being a story concept writer I only wrote main story but when I get a chance to
work for movie version of my fiction as creative director or visualizer I will
do my best. For the sake of ‘continuity’ when adopting fiction for movie
version writer will end up developing small subplots or scenes. Writing
senseless dialog is difficult for me which you will find it in most of the
Indian movies.
Here is the starting paragraph from my fiction
‘Broken Heart’. This is how I wish to present first paragraph. Here I am
not writing about lighting condition, camera angle or composition.
BROKEN HEART
FIRST PARAGRAPH.
Our happy family consists of my dad, mom and I. We
had our own house in vadapalani Chennai. My dad was working for a north Indian
company in Chennai. He was very strict when it comes to studies and
disciplines. After completing my studies as a software engineer I was looking
for a job in Chennai. Even though I got a job offer from Bombay and Delhi my
parents wants me to work here in Chennai. They do not want me to work in a
faraway place.
******
We all are capable of presenting this simple
paragraph using our own idea. I am yet to learn screenplay writing. This is how
I wish to present the scene with opening shot.
Copter cam positioned high above the temple.
Graduated orange colored filter for camera or we I will 'paint' sky
later with golden hue. View point Marina beach. Scene. Time laps
photography is used for gradual early morning sun rise. Couples of digital
birds are flying parallel to the horizon. In the back ground one can
hear early morning devotional song. Gradually copter cam comes down
in front of the temple. In big bold letters CHENNAI appear and gradually
fades away. At about four feet from ground copter cam take forty five degree
turn .in front of a house my mother giving finishing touches to Kolam .she
gets up and looks at her creation and satisfied with her work. She turns around
and came to sitting room. Whistling sound can be heard from the milk cooker.
She goes to kitchen to make coffee. After hearing whistling sound of milk
cooker my dad open his eyes. He gets out of the bed and comes to visiting room
in pajama. He takes news paper and start reading it. Mother after pouring
coffee in two cups takes it to the visiting room and handed over one cup to my
dad and sat next to him. They both drink coffee.
Maa…. “What is today’s special news”?
Dad “our C.M is going to inaugurate metro train
service” After finishing coffee my mother collect empty coffee cup and was
about to leave for kitchen.
Dad “Sit with me”.
Maa... “Today is not Sunday, before you go office I
have to prepare breakfast and lunch for you…”
Dad “O”, I forgot, carry on….”Maa goes to kitchen
with empty cups.
I slowly opened his eyes and looks at the table
clock. 7.32 am. I got out of the bed and come to visiting room in pajama.
I “Morning dad…”
Dad “Good morning Ajay, Sit. What is your today’s
program”?
I “MAA….COFFEE”…... “Dad today at 10.30 I have to
attend an interview at C.S. it is at sholinganallur”.
Maa pour one cup of coffee from flask and brought
for me.
Maa “if you get job in Chennai I will break one
hundred and one coconut at pillayar temple”
I” Maa…every time you say this I get job only in
faraway places “.
Maa “For you everything is a joke”. She goes back
to kitchen.
Dad “Best of luck Ajay” He handed over newspaper to me. “I will get dressed up for office…” he goes to his room to freshen up.
After going through newspaper I left for my room to get ready for interview.
At 8.30 A.M. Maa started arranging breakfast on
dining table. I and dad come out of our room and we all had breakfast. Maa
handed over suitcase and lunch box to dad .I take my dad on my bike to his
office at mount road. After dropping him I went straight to C.S office at sholinganallur for interview. After attending interview he was offered job.
Interviewer “you are excellent; we are offering
your 50K per month as starting salary. You will be posted in our Mumbai office”
I “Thank you for your offer; I am looking for a job
in Chennai”.
Interviewer “At present we do not have job
opportunity in our Chennai office. You can join for job at Mumbai .As and
when there is vacancy in our Chennai branch you can take up job here”.
I “Fine sir, plz let me know when there is vacancy
in Chennai office so that I can join here”.
Interviewer “Sure, we will let you know…”
I “Thanks. Bye, sir…”
I came out of the office and went to cafeteria and
had lunch. After lunch I went straight to Sathyam Theater to watch
TERMINATOR GENESIS. After movie I went to Elliot beach to meet three
of my friends. Rajeev, Rahul and Sanjeev were already waiting for me at the
usual place.
Rahul “Bro, how was interview?”
I “Tough one, But I scored maximum marks. They gave
me one project. I had to finish it in three hours time but I managed to finish
it in two hours, forty minutes and fifty five seconds. The interviewer was very
much impressed with my performance. Later he told me that same project will
take more than three hours to complete.
Rajeev “so, they offered you job?”
I “Of course, they offered me job with 50K salary
per month”
Sanjay “O.K, let’s celebrate!” today you are going
give treat for us”.
I “wait! I had to decline their job offer!”
Rahul “But why Bro?” they are the one of the
leading software company in India…”
I “They offered me job at their Mumbai head office.
At present they do not have job vacancy here in Chennai. May be in future as
and when there is vacancies in Chennai they can get me transfer to Chennai”.
Rajeev “In my opinion you should have joined for job
at Mumbai head office. Mumbai is a nice place to live-in”.
I “you all know that my parents will not allow me
to work in faraway places .they want me to get a job here in Chennai. I told
interviewer to inform me as and when there is a vacancy here in Chennai office.
That was the end of interview”.
Sanjay” Do not worry Ajay, for your qualification
you will get a better job here in Chennai”.
I “O.K, so who is going to order for snacks today?”
Rahul “today it is my turn... tell me your choice
of snacks I will order it “.
I “let’s have Pepperoni pizza”.
He dialed papa john and ordered four pepperoni
pizzas and two litter of coke. In about fifteen minutes time pizza boy
delivered coke and pizza for all. Rahul paid for that. Pepperoni pizza was
really good.
After spending some more time at the beach we all
left for home around 8PM.
I got home around 8.30 p.m. my parents were
watching T.V program.
Maa “Ajay, have you got job”?
I “Yes, Maa...”
Maa “when you have to join for work”?
I “Any time at I can join for work at their Mumbai
Head office”.
Maa “No...No… I do not want you to work at their
Mumbai office”. Try to get a job here in Chennai…”
I “they do not have vacancy in their Chennai
office”
Dad “Ajay, Don’t worry, there is always another
chance”.
I “Yes, Dad”.
Maa “you take bath and come for dinner”.
I “Yes, Maa...”
At around
9 p.m they all had dinner. After dinner his parents watched T.V program till 10pm Later they went to bed. Ajay after watching TV program till 11 am went to
sleep.
Hope I managed to write appropriate dialog. There
is scope for improving dialog. Do you need screenplay or shooting script to
shoot above scenes? I do not need screenplay, shooting script or storyboard to shoot these simple scenes. Just little bit of planning scenes
alone will do.
Developing subplots are part of creative director’s
work. A director should be capable of visualizing scene by scene. Visualizer
should assist director and graphic artists using sketches or table top model.
He should also be capable of designing poster, running titles and set
designing.
Given a chance to work as creative director
for movie version of my fiction I will set my story in your choice of country
at moderate budget also I will convert my fiction into movie script. Each
paragraph will be made into scenes with appropriate dialog. I will also design
movie poster (concept) run title, credit title, assist director and graphic
artists to get my kind of visualization.
Author of ‘Eternal love and Broken Heart”.
Jivan.
Read few chapters of Eternal love and broken heart here on my blog.
SAMPLE SHOT OF KOLAM /RANGOLI.
