Thursday, March 27, 2025

why do I hate writing screenplay ?

 Why do I hate writing screenplay ? 

When I adapt my story for movie production I will not use the screenplay. I will use my manuscript. Manuscript will give more details about character and situations . All I need is a bit of planning for shooting. In the screenplay you will not find a detailed description of character or situations.


Eternal Love đź’• 

First chapter. 

My Dad Mr. Vishwanath Pratap singh and chairman of Dax airways arranged a grand party for my convocation day celebration at the super deluxe five star hotel. 

A car came and stopped in front of our huge metal gate. Sound horn. A small window opened within the main gate and our old security guard peeped through it.

Neha " uncle, open the gate"

Security guard open the main gate and car entered into compund. Neha parked care by the side and entered into the visiting room.

My parents were watching TV in our visiting room.

“Hello, uncle. Hai, aunty!"

Maa. How are you sweety pie "?

“Fine, Aunty"

My parents like her but they never took her seriously. She is a fun loving girl.

" Aunty, it's 6.30. Ajay is not yet ready. I will go get him"

 My bedroom door was open. She just walked in “Ajay, its 6.30 and you are not yet ready"

 I was fixing a tie, I knew it was Neha. I was expecting her. Without looking at her I said

 â€śI am almost ready. Let me fix my tie"

 May I help you....?”

 â€śNo, I will manage”

 On a huge wall mounted mirror I saw her reflection. She looks very sexy in her new outfit. She dyed her hair in copper color. She wore a knee length leather jacket. She is an attention seeker. She pulled down jacket zip and give poses.

“How is it?"

Now she wants me to approve of her.

“WOW”!

Inside her knee length jacket he wore a cut baniyan. Her beautiful cleavage and heavy bosom was visible. Her vertical slit navel was pierced with a platinum ring. It looks cute on her flat abdomen. Her macro leather shorts displayed her perfect bottom and slender legs.

She acted more like a show stopper but looked more like a pop icon.

“Guys are going to faint"!

I wore an Armani tuxedo suitings .

“You are the most handsome guy among our friends “I took it as a compliment.

She put her arm around my waist and pulled me close “selfie time"

She took a few shots with pouting and without pouting.

 â€śCome on Neha we are getting late"

 She pulled up her zip and we came down to the visiting room.

 â€śDad, I will be back by 11 pm.”

 â€śTake care Ajay”

 â€śAjay, drive carefully"

 â€śSure Maa..."

 We got into my Ferrari convertible . I played heavy metal music and entered the main road. There is a shortcut to the hotel but in the evening peak hours it will take more than one hour.

 â€śAjay, you missed the left turn”

 â€śEvening peak hours it will take one hour to reach the hotel. I will hit on highway .on fast track I can zoom past all other vehicles and reach hotel on time"

 â€śOkay, as you wish"

 I entered the highway and left all other vehicles behind me, for a few more minutes until 7 pm....                                                                                                                        

                                xxxxx


Sample of screenplay 

Eternal love by chatGPT.


FADE IN:

EXT. VISHWANATH PRATAP SINGH'S MANSION - EVENING - A.D. 2005

A grand mansion with a huge metal gate. A car approaches and stops in front of the gate. The sound of the horn echoes.

INT. SECURITY BOOTH - CONTINUOUS

An old SECURITY GUARD peeps through a small window in the gate.

NEHA

Uncle, open the gate!

The guard nods and opens the gate. The car drives into the compound.


EXT. MANSION COMPOUND - CONTINUOUS

Neha parks the car and heads towards the visiting room.

INT. VISITING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

NEHA walks in. MR. VISHWANATH PRATAP SINGH and MRS. SINGH are watching TV.

NEHA

Hello, uncle. Hi, aunty!

MRS. SINGH

How are you, sweety pie?

NEHA

Fine, aunty.

Mrs. Singh smiles. Neha is fun-loving, but Mr. and Mrs. Singh never take her seriously.

NEHA

Aunty, it's 6:30. Ajay is not ready yet. I'll go get him.

INT. AJAY'S BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER

The door is open. AJAY is fixing his tie. Neha walks in.

NEHA

Ajay, it's 6:30 and you're not ready yet.

Without looking at her, Ajay responds.

AJAY

I'm almost ready. Just need to fix my tie.

NEHA

May I help you?

AJAY

No, I'll manage.

Ajay glances at her reflection in the wall-mounted mirror. Neha looks stunning in her new outfit—copper-colored hair, knee-length leather jacket. She poses, seeking approval.

NEHA

How is it?

AJAY

WOW!

Under the jacket, she wears a cut baniyan, revealing her cleavage and pierced navel. Her macro leather shorts display her legs and perfect bottom. She looks like a pop icon.

NEHA

Guys are going to faint!

Ajay, now in an Armani tuxedo, smiles.

NEHA

You are the most handsome guy among our friends.

Neha pulls him closer for a selfie. They take a few shots.

AJAY

Come on, Neha. We're getting late.

Neha zips up her jacket. They head downstairs.

INT. VISITING ROOM - CONTINUOUS

AJAY

Dad, I'll be back by 11 PM.

MR. SINGH

Take care, Ajay.

MRS. SINGH

Ajay, drive carefully.

AJAY

Sure, Mom.


EXT. MANSION COMPOUND - MOMENTS LATER

Ajay and Neha get into his Ferrari convertible. He plays heavy metal music as they drive onto the main road.

NEHA

There's a shortcut to the hotel, but it's peak hour. It'll take more than an hour.

AJAY

We'll make it.

They drive off into the bustling evening traffic.


                        FADE OUT.