CLIMAX AND RESOLUTION.
07-05-25.
Climax and resolution is the most important part of any story. You cannot leave loose ends at the end of the story.
I write stories pretty fast. You can see me rushing throughout the story. First draft after spell and grammar check I just published it. Eighteen years ago I didn't know the importance of proper editing and polishing.
Now I wrote the Revised edition and I have developed subplots and scenes with dialogues. To add more pages to the story, convert each paragraph into a situation or scene and add dialogues.
Here is a light hearted scene of CLIMAX AND RESOLUTION of Eternal Love.
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I was missing in action. I alone went home to bring my parents to bless suraj and sandhya.
While driving home I received a call from Maya
" Ajay, where are you"?
" I am on my way home to bring my parents to bless " our" children. You ask the priest to start the marriage function. If my parents come before the marriage function they will ask " our" children's parents and we will be in soup "
"Okay, Ajay. I got it "
Ajay and Sandhya's marriage take place simultaneously.
When I reached home my parents were talking in our visiting room . My parents were delighted to see me in a wedding suit. They thought it was my funny way of doing things since they had already told me that I would have to marry their choice of girl when I come back home.
" Mom, I am ready for marriage. Where is the bride "?
Mom: " Ajay, when will you grow up?''
Dad " Ajay, Stop kidding. We cannot order bride online "
" Mom , Dad, before my marriage I have one last request "
Mom and Dad said in unison
" No more request, No more excuses "
"Okay…..okay. two young couples are getting married, just come with me and bless them. Your honour ! That's my one and only last request for both of you "
" Ajay, hope you are not playing a prank with us "?
" Just one last request, nothing serious "
" Okay, let us change our dress "
" Mom, auspicious time of marriage will run out"
" Your parents are not teenagers to put on makeup . You just wait for five minutes''
After my parents changed their clothes I drove them back to the wedding hall.
When I arrived with my parents at the marriage hall the marriage function was already over. Suraj and sandhya were seated on a special chair with their bride and groom in front of a huge curtain on stage.
As soon as my parents entered on stage newly married couples got up from the chairs. I introduced Suraj and his bride Jiya to my parents .
" Dad, Meet son of Maya Mr. Suraj and his bride Jiya "
Dad hook his hand with Suraj
“ Congratulations. How are you, young man”? He hugged Suraj.
Mom handed over gifts to Jiya.
Both of them got blessings from my parents.
Then I introduced Sandhya to Mom.
" Here is my surprise gift for you. Your granddaughter Sandhya and " our " love child "
Mom was taken by surprise. She wept with joy. My parents blessed Sandhya and her husband Amith and give them gifts
I introduced the Riyaz family to my parents.
“ Mr and Mrs Riyaz , adopted parents of Sandhya”
My parents were very much pleased to meet Mr and Mrs Riyaz Khan . They thanked them profusely.
Mom: " Ajay, where is Ji ji “? ( G G)
I " MAAYAA ….."
Behind us a huge curtain was opening up.
She emerged from the gathering in a wedding dress and came to us.
Maya and I fell at my parent’s feet and asked for their blessing. My parents became very emotional.
" Mom, Dad . Please bless us too"
Mom pulled me up by my ear.
“Get up, Ajay “
" Mom, I am CEO of DAX airways”
" So, what "? You produce a baby without getting married "? Now why do you need blessings from us"?
In low voice " Mom, to produce more babies"
Mom pretended as if she didn't hear me.
" Come again"
" I said bless us for our honeymoon"
" No honeymoon without marriage. Where is the priest "?
" Look Mom, there is a priest ! "
They all turned around and saw Mandapam ( within the marriage hall there is a small Mandapam. That is where traditional marriage takes place) and a priest was waiting.
Priest " All are welcome "
We all moved towards the Mandapam.
Dad " Raji, everything was scripted by your son. All we need is to act"
Mom: " Game is not yet over. After the marriage Ajay will have to get blessings from us "
I and Maya sat together. Priest started prayer (Slokas. It will take another half an hour) I told the priest in a low voice
" yo, hurry up" and he finished the prayer in five minutes !
After the prayer I tied a mangalsutra (wedding chain) on Maya. We got up and again we knelt down in front of my parents for blessings. My parents blessed us whole heartedly. My Dad was so happy for me. He congratulated me and held me close to his heart.
Mom stretches her hands at Maya
" Come on Maya "
My Mom hugged Maya and wept with joy.
" Mom, she is all yours" !
" Maya, your love for Ajay brought him back to life"
I waited for my parents to overcome their emotions. At last they regained their composure.
I pulled Maya along with me.
Mom: “ Ajay, where are you off to "?
" So, long Mom, I will be back after the honeymoon . Take care. Bye Dad”
As we ran towards the main door family, relatives and friends threw rose petals on us. A traditional way of blessing newly married couples.
We went and got into my ferrari convertible. By that time everyone appeared at the entrance of the marriage hall.
We both waved at them and they all waved back. I put the car on auto pilot mode and we started our new life with a gentle kiss on the lips.
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We took our first flight to Switzerland and started our married life with a marathon lov
e making session . That was only the beginning of our Eternal Games !
( THE END)
